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JimmyG
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Sat Nov 05, 2005 5:40 am Post subject:
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Neither show any semblance of fall color nor do they have any compositional
quality worth mentioning. Study, study, study. |
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Sun Nov 06, 2005 3:26 am Post subject:
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On Sat, 05 Nov 2005 06:34:39 -0800, name wrote:
| Quote: | http://images.fotopic.net/ydsbz0.jpg
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I like the idea of the one endangered/dying tree struggling against the
background of a forest of overwhelming size and domination. Sadly, I don't
know that the photo really really does a good job of presenting it.
-Mike |
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name
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Mon Nov 07, 2005 5:40 am Post subject:
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Stacey wrote:
| Quote: | Derek Fountain wrote:
Look for a old log or
something which can be placed in the foreground to draw the eye into
the shot. A bird or something on the water would also help the eye fix
into the shot.
Yep, it needs SOMETHING other than a shot of a tree line. Even if you shot a
curved bank of the lake it would have some interest. It's like a straight
line of trees with a straight bank with water at the bottom and sky at the
top. It needs something different, this is a ugly gimp edit but if the lake
bank was curved along with the straight tree line it might pull your eye
around into the red tree?
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2005-1/937049/testlake.JPG
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Stacey
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I didn't have a shovel handy, otherwise I would have relocated the red
tree to the side of the pond create a more appealing composition. :-) |
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Mickey Mouse
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Mon Nov 07, 2005 5:40 am Post subject:
Re: a couple of autumn pictures |
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George, are you still trying to load your digital with film? I've, got some
bad news for you!
Try some meditation, and ponder for a while....lol
P.s. Goofy says Hi!
Mickey
"George Kerby" <ghost_topper@hotmail.com> wrote in message
news:BF93DBB3.2E307%ghost_topper@hotmail.com...
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On 11/6/05 2:25 PM, in article
436e66b5$0$26602$afc38c87@news.optusnet.com.au, "Mickey Mouse" <.> wrote:
Unfortunately that would be a little off topic. I do think however one
should not completely denigrate another persons effort without
constructive
criticisms. I only have one word for you though.....
Ohhhhmmmmmmmmmmm.
lol
Mickey
"George Kerby" <ghost_topper@hotmail.com> wrote in message
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On 11/6/05 5:14 AM, in article
436de57f$0$25854$afc38c87@news.optusnet.com.au, "Mickey Mouse" <.
wrote:
All criticisms are valid. However I do see what you see. I was once
given
some very sound advice and I pass it on two you.
Many look but only a few can see. Look at you pictures and crop them
with
your mind. Find the picture within the picture. Sometimes, there are
many
pictures within a picture. You must know that a picture tells a
thousand
words, but your pictures don't speak. They don't convey the feeling
that
made you take the pictures in the first place. However the pictures
are
there, I can see them, so must you. Go back and take the same pictures
again but this time think about the light and time of day, think about
filters and how they can convey the mood. Don't just look, but see as
well
the pictures within the frame, there are quite a few there. You must
make
the observer feel what you feel.
Hope this makes some little sense for you... good luck
Mickey
MAN! All that from a rodent!
I guess Goofy will be discussing Existentialism next...
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Stacey
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Mon Nov 07, 2005 5:40 am Post subject:
Re: a couple of autumn pictures |
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Derek Fountain wrote:
| Quote: | Look for a old log or
something which can be placed in the foreground to draw the eye into
the shot. A bird or something on the water would also help the eye fix
into the shot.
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Yep, it needs SOMETHING other than a shot of a tree line. Even if you shot a
curved bank of the lake it would have some interest. It's like a straight
line of trees with a straight bank with water at the bottom and sky at the
top. It needs something different, this is a ugly gimp edit but if the lake
bank was curved along with the straight tree line it might pull your eye
around into the red tree?
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2005-1/937049/testlake.JPG
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Stacey |
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Stacey
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Mon Nov 07, 2005 5:40 am Post subject:
Re: a couple of autumn pictures |
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name wrote:
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I didn't have a shovel handy, otherwise I would have relocated the red
tree to the side of the pond create a more appealing composition. :-)
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Yes, you could have possibly walked to a different point. And no, the red
tree didn't need to be in the center. Maybe this is just a poor choice of
subject altogether?
Please ignore the sugestions and keep taking really boring images which you
will probably do anyway. And yes, it ticks me off I just wasted my time
trying to help you only get this smart ass remark.
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